when I do not say
even
when I fail to do good
even
though there is no fault to be had
anywhere
even
in the absence of you I regret your presence
even
when you were here.
@junemoon 2008
like water on a rock or off a duck’s butt…
the every day life of me
when I do not say
even
when I fail to do good
even
though there is no fault to be had
anywhere
even
in the absence of you I regret your presence
even
when you were here.
@junemoon 2008
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Monday, March 10, 2008 at 12:36 am
janetleigh
Whoa! This is excellently executed; whoops, probably a bad word choice, but it does have a hint of having killed off a feeling, no? This is just excellent. Thanks for sharing. I’m stopping by via chughes blog. I’m glad I did..
Thanks for sharing this.
Monday, March 10, 2008 at 10:17 am
junemoon
Welcome, janetleigh, to my little slice of blog heaven. It always warms my writer’s heart when someone resonates with words I have cobbled together and then takes the time to let me know. Thank you! I’ll stop by your blog and see what’s a cookin’. junemoon